SHOT LIST -
(This was our initial idea for our thriller, when shooting we then realised it wasnt tension building or suspensful enough as there was no element of fear. )
(This was our initial idea for our thriller, when shooting we then realised it wasnt tension building or suspensful enough as there was no element of fear. )
- The first shot located in a normal bedroom and is an over shoulder shot of a girl looking at a picture of her and someone else both looking quite close together. Diegetic sound of the girl crying will be shown enabling the audience to feel for the character.
- It then cuts to a close up shot of her crying which enables the audience to get to know the character and see the characters distressed emotions. The audience should already be left in suspense and should start to question why this girl is crying? and what relevance does it have to this picture? Who is the other character in the picture?
- This then cuts to a mid close up shot of the female character standing in her bedroom and there is a window in the shot as well with the character underneath showing the audience the location and the window could bring light into the situation.
- This cuts to the camera then zooming into the window and then you see the title of the film which is currently undecided. Also whilst the camera is zooming into one of the window frames the sound of the girl crying gets quieter and this shot fades to the next scene.
- It then cuts to a close up shot of the lift buttons also showing some of the lift door, the female character is then shown pressing the button on the lift, the camera shows a close up shot of her hand pushing the button. It shows the importance of her entering the lift as you don't know what could happen when she enters the lift, it leaves you in suspense. You can also hear the diegetic sound of the lift coming down, as it is a diegetic sound it adds tension to what's happening. The door then opens and you see the character walk into the lift, the audience can see the character in the lift as the doors close but only not all of her, giving a sense of ambiguity to the scene.
- Cut to a shot of the character looking ahead into the distance, this will be a close up shot so the audience can get to know this character. The character will have headphones in whilst she is standing in the lift and there will be diegetic sound of the music the character is listening to, however it the audience will only be able to slightly hear the music as the audience would be put in the perspective of someone nearby that character who can only hear a quiet sound. This gives the illusion that there may be another character near by but your never sure if there is or not.
- Cuts to an over shoulder shot of the character walking out of the lift as the door is opening.The diegetic sound in this shot will be of the female characters footsteps. You then see her look at someone however you cant see who she is looking at but an over shoulder shot of that character is shown walking into the lift.
- This then cuts to a shot of dingy looking toilet, the camera then pans across the toilet cubical's, this will set the scene and show the audience what a grim place it is. The female character then enters the toilet whilst taking her headphones out and walks into one of the cubical's and shuts the door.
- You see a close up shot of her sitting in the cubicle in distress looking petrified, there's something about this other male character that has threatened her and the audience are left in anticipation on what has happened between them. You then see an over the should shot of her looking at the same photo she was looking at in the beginning. Background noise of someone entering the toilet will appear, we know this by the sound of footsteps.
- Cuts to a point of view shot of the female character who is about to gradually open the door.This could make the character and the audience both seem vulnerable as there is no clue as to what might happen in the next few seconds.
- The last shot shows the door opened and the male character standing right behind it looking menacing and powerful. He looks a lot bigger than her in the shot showing his dominance over her showing her vulnerable she is. However the audience are still not able to see his face clearly making the situation even more ambiguous.
- There would be ambient lighting used throughout to make everything seem more realistic and as the locations are dully lit this creates a tense eerie atmosphere.
Extra shots I thought we could include
-There could be a mirror shot where the camera just focuses on her reflection in the mirror, making the character seem more isolated and shows the intimacy's of being alone. It also allows the audience to see her emotions and get to know this character more.
- A point of view shot could also be used when the female character is hiding from the other leaving a tense atmosphere as your left unsure as to what will happen to this girl.
-When in the lift the girl may have dropped something that you see on her beforehand, for example a ring or a bracelet, she could be wearing a ring when she presses the button the lift but then suddenly after seeing the ambiguous figure the ring is on the floor in the cubicle which could be the last shot.
Characters + Costumes
-Female character- hopefully played by Alice. She is a vulnerable character - maybe she has gone through a lot in her life, audience are left unsure as to what has really happened to her.
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Locations (pictures due to be put up shortly)
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