An effective presentation of outlets, you could add another page re short film competitions.
Also you need to make it clear re Warp Films as possibly financing your film and cinema exhibition that your film would need to be developed as a full length feature film which (a possibility tells the story of three young people who get caught up in......) Do note that in reality your film is about 2 minutes long so development would be important.
You could also identify one or two key aspect of your film which would encourage Warp to produce your film. Think about story line, ambiguity of two lead characters (Warp produced Dead Man's Shoes and This is England which are uncompromising films with unknown actors which tell the stories of young males in crisis....)
Well done Lyndsey your responses are promising and indicate without revisions strong Level 3.
An effective presentation of outlets, you could add another page re short film competitions.
ReplyDeleteAlso you need to make it clear re Warp Films as possibly financing your film and cinema exhibition that your film would need to be developed as a full length feature film which (a possibility tells the story of three young people who get caught up in......) Do note that in reality your film is about 2 minutes long so development would be important.
You could also identify one or two key aspect of your film which would encourage Warp to produce your film. Think about story line, ambiguity of two lead characters (Warp produced Dead Man's Shoes and This is England which are uncompromising films with unknown actors which tell the stories of young males in crisis....)
Well done Lyndsey your responses are promising and indicate without revisions strong Level 3.