Well done for referencing the idea of zeitgeist and how your film represents contemporary Britain. A little vague nevertheless, try to explain instead how your characters seem to be isolated and troubled thus linking to the concerns young people have about their future in austerity Britain. On this latter point the young man who is in the bathroom is visited by inner demons thus young audiences who feel isolated and are trying to make sense of their future could identify with this character who is trapped.
A proficient response but your first section on the zeitgeist is too generalised and needs to specifically root itself in problems that are currently facing young people and the body language of the young man in the toilet.
Well done for referencing the idea of zeitgeist and how your film represents contemporary Britain. A little vague nevertheless, try to explain instead how your characters seem to be isolated and troubled thus linking to the concerns young people have about their future in austerity Britain. On this latter point the young man who is in the bathroom is visited by inner demons thus young audiences who feel isolated and are trying to make sense of their future could identify with this character who is trapped.
ReplyDeleteA proficient response but your first section on the zeitgeist is too generalised and needs to specifically root itself in problems that are currently facing young people and the body language of the young man in the toilet.